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Scene 057: dmz show and tell

Scene
57
Pages
211–219
When
4-5 Nov YDAU (2009) — the room scene over lunch hour (continuing scene 050's day), the planning 'over the course of the next academic day,' fence-side on 'a raw 11/5 P.M.' (Thursday, p. 216)
Where
Pemulis/Troeltsch/Schacht's triple in subdorm B, E.T.A.; then the Show Courts fence after P.M. drills; flashback to Antitoi Entertainment, Prospect St., Inman Square, Cambridgein: E.T.A. (Enfield Tennis Academy) › E.T.A. subdormitories · Inman Square / "Little Lisbon", Cambridge › Antitoi Entertainment (also)
POV
3rd person with Pemulis and Hal; one flashback paragraph to the Antitoi transaction

Connects to (editorial cuts & payoffs, 16)

Summary

Pemulis displays thirteen 50-mg artifacts of the incredibly potent DMZ in his upturned yachting cap to Hal and Axford — "The Great White Shark of organo-synthesized hallucinogens" — and runs through CIA-era lore, sale options, and the research problem: the literature is vague on titration and unanimous only on potency, its centerpiece the Leavenworth soldier whose massive dose "picked his mind up and carried it off somewhere and put it down someplace and forgot where," leaving him singing show tunes in a deadly-accurate Ethel Merman voice (whence the phone-designation "Ethel"). A flashback details the acquisition: dumbshow negotiation at Antitoi Entertainment with two reputed former Canadian insurgents who, "like fucking Nucksters," had no idea what they had. Over the next day the trio decides duty requires self-experimentation in safe amounts; Hal's one condition is a physical med-library verification that the compound is organic and nonaddictive. Fence-side on a raw 11/5, against E.W.D. catapult-thuds and a yellow waste-cloud over Acton, they calendar around Port Washington, the 11/20 fundraiser against Québec's junior squads (arranged via Avril's expatriate offices; the conjoined Vaught twins' exhibition makes Saturday class-free), landing on 11/20-21 — pending Pemulis actually making the WhataBurger travel list he's blithely assuming. Axford predicts a soul-wringing hangover; Hal counters that hallucinogens leave him "a kind of pale sweet aura, a luminescence" (n.76 traces the same halo to his childhood approval-performances). "Halation, Axford observed."

What to notice

The scene runs on one ironic engine: catastrophe handled as connoisseurship. Pemulis studies the tablets with loupe and philatelic forceps, spreading his contraband in the window-flaw's bubble of light "sort of the way older people will array all their valuables in quiet moments", and the trio talks itself into dosing as "duty, almost, to the spirits of inquiry and good trade practice" — scholarship as the honorable face of appetite. Hal's tell sits in plain sight: he proposes two or three tablets "knowing he sounds greedy but unable to help himself", and "there's always room in Hal's budget for spirited inquiry" is the budget line the whole collapse plot will call due. Notice that the drug's entire dossier is a single horror story — a dose that "picked his mind up and carried it off somewhere and put it down someplace and forgot where" — and that the boys metabolize it as a titration problem and a cute phone code, scheduling potential mind-loss around a fundraiser and the Boards. The anecdote arrives "out of fucking Moment of all sources": Steeply's cover magazine supplying E.T.A.'s drug lore, a wink nobody on the page can see. The Antitoi flashback is farce with a delayed detonator — Pemulis preening as W. Penn fleecing "babe-in-the-woods Natives", when the dim broom-cradling partner he's fleecing is Lucien Antitoi, and the mirrors that here multiply head-waggles into "a kind of group psychomotor seizure" will later frame the book's gentlest murder. And after eight pages of scheming prose the closing image goes to Schacht — the one player with no ego left to protect — laughing at the net with the man who just beat him, Mario's laugh ringing out over the fence: the scene's counter-argument, delivered wordlessly.

Beats — page-by-page

  • p. 211-212: The hat of tablets; Pemulis's side-to-side film-noir head-thing; epithets ("Yale U. of the Ivy League of Acid"); CIA-era experiments — "Subjects locked away in institutions and written off as casualties of peace."
  • p. 212-213: The bell-bottomed mod-hipster trademark; sale fantasias (think tanks, "very progressive and hip-type nursing homes," Harvard Square chess-players) vs. the "sheer-entertainment route" of dosing the Gatorade barrels (at "the meet with Port Washington Tuesday" — see the date-tension note above); "a baker's dozen" of tablets; contraband arrayed jeweler-like in the window-flaw's ale-colored light-bubble, on the wall the poster of the paranoid king and "an enormous hand-drawn Sierpinski gasket" (n.73: Nwangi's beady room-inspections); "The literature's mute on the titration."
  • p. 213-214: MED.COM searches yield "potent this, sinister that"; Hal — "his mother Avril's child when it comes to databases" — demands a physical med-library trip.
  • p. 214-215: The Moment-sourced Leavenworth soldier: mind literally misplaced, found "in some impossible lotus position"; Axford's joke that Pemulis has stumbled on "a possible explanation for poor old Lyle and his lotus position down in the weight room" (p. 214); the Army's defense that he no longer "legally exist[s] enough to bring suit"; "We could even designate it 'Ethel,' for on the phone" (p. 215); Hal proposes two or three tablets "knowing he sounds greedy but unable to help himself," and arranges the tablets into E.T.A.'s cardioid shape.
  • p. 215-216: The Antitoi flashback: small-arms-draped duo, mirrors and pebbled vases multiplying the head-waggling into "a kind of group psychomotor seizure," 5x-speed porn cartridge; 650 mg for trinket prices — Pemulis as W. Penn buying New Jersey; the sneaker-toe drop-ceiling entrepôt.
  • p. 216-217: The duty-to-sample decision; Hal's organic/nonaddictive condition; fence-side 11/5 — Schacht's sanguine exhibition loss to the Syrian, his post-knee "purgatorial existence in 128-256 Alphabetville"; E.W.D. catapult thud, the keening unseen projectile, the yellow sheep-shaped cloud, ATHSCME fans on the Lowell-Methuen border; 36 demand-free hours required (HmH "just not being a good DMZ-dropping venue at all").
  • p. 217-218: Calendar engineering: Port Washington tomorrow (chartered buses, no motel); the 11/20 fundraiser vs. Québec's "notoriously hapless" Jr. Davis/Wightman squads via Avril's quiet offices (n.74; n.75: Hal's private dread of being fed to Wayne for the gala); the Vaught twins — fused at the temples, unbeaten in three years, banned from singles; window set at 11/20-21 before the WhataBurger and 12/12 Boards.
  • p. 218: Hangover forecasting: Axford's "wrung-out sponge" vs. Hal's "pale sweet aura, a luminescence" (n.76: the B.C.D.C. Gifted classification, dictionary-memorizing for "a proudly nonchalant mother," the LSD-afterglow-like halo of approved grace) — "Halation, Axford observed."
  • p. 218-219: Pemulis's unexamined assumption he'll make the Tucson list at rank 128; deLint's e-mail-penpal/one-enormous-tit simile (n.77: Pemulis's Bosch-hell deLint TP game); Hal a lock "barring some sort of cataclysmic ankle-relapse."
  • p. 219: Schacht and the Syrian laughing at the net; Mario's laugh rings out — warmth closing a scene of careful bad planning.

Themes in this scene

  • Addiction and Recovery: connoisseurship as cover for appetite — Hal's greed audible to himself; the "spirited inquiry" rationalization; a drug whose defining anecdote is a permanently lost mind, scheduled around a tournament calendar.
  • The Body and Tennis: rankings as fate (Alphabetville purgatory, travel-list mathematics, seeding dread); Schacht's post-injury freedom from ego the quiet counter-model.
  • Nationalism and O.N.A.N.: the Antitoi "former Canadian insurgents," Québec squads imported via Avril, E.W.D. waste-catapults and ATHSCME border fans — the geopolitical machinery humming under a drug deal and a fundraiser.
  • Family and Hamlet: n.76's etiology of Hal's halo — performance for "a proudly nonchalant mother" whose nonjudgment was itself the pressure; Avril's fingerprints on both the database instinct and the Québec invitation.

Connections — backward & forward

Backward

  • The Sierpinski gasket on Pemulis's wall (p. 213) is the figure Wallace himself cited for the novel's structure (and Carlisle's Introduction thesis-figure) — the book's blueprint hanging in the DMZ-dealer's room.
  • "Madame Psychosis" as DMZ's name (scene 050) now sits beside the soldier's lost mind and scene 056's prayer to lose one's mind (p. 202) — three statements of the same dread.
  • "Halation" was Hal's nickname-gloss in the locker room (scene 032, p. 97 range: "A halo-shaped exposure-pattern around light sources seen on chemical film at low speed"); n.76 deepens it into the approval-performance halo — the precise emotional mechanism scene 001 shows burned out.

Forward

  • Continues scene 050 (same 4 Nov, the hat's contents now on the bed) and scene 013's DMZ foreshadow; the 11/20-21 plan is the fuse of the book's endgame — see the n.321 narrative-note file (scene n321: the med-library findings, the fitviavi/G.C.-M.S.-invisibility data, Pemulis's titration math — print's wrong derivative per the Mike Strong edition note the archive records) and the 20-Nov arc itself (scene 183's dateline; Pemulis's discovered stash and expulsion 17 Nov, n.324/n.332 files; the open question of whether/what Hal ingests before Year of Glad, scene 001).
  • Antitoi Entertainment returns catastrophically: the A.F.R. raid on the shop, Lucien's death by broom, and the brothers' inventory (including DMZ and read-only Entertainment copies) — scene 097, pp. 475-489 — the dumbshow comedy here is that thread's overture.
  • DMZ-count tension (recorded in the archive's catalog, Carlisle C07): here "a baker's dozen" (p. 213) / "thirteen incredibly potent 50-mg. artifacts" totaling 650 mg (pp. 215-216) vs. p. 482, scene 097's "eighteen" lozenges of 650 mg each — authorial; Carlisle reads the barter as 650 mg TOTAL. Kept as printed per scene.
  • The Ethel-Merman anecdote comes "out of fucking Moment of all sources" (p. 214) — Moment is Hugh Steeply's cover employer (scenes 045/061/064): the Entertainment-hunting agency's house organ supplying the boys' drug lore, a wink the boys can't see.
  • n.75's "utter demapping" extends the maps-territory idiom (scenes 040/054); the Vaught twins and the fundraiser stage-set return in the gala scenes; Port Washington meet results thread into the following week's E.T.A. material.
  • The E.W.D. catapult and yellow cloud are the annular waste-cycle (scene 047's Concavity context; Mario's film history) intruding on a casual afternoon.

Notable passages (6)

  • p. 214: "One monograph had this toss-off about DMZ where the guy invites you to envision acid that has itself dropped acid." — the compound's whole mythology in one sentence.
  • p. 214: "the massive dose picked his mind up and carried it off somewhere and put it down someplace and forgot where" — the DMZ thesis-anecdote; pairs with scene 056's mind-in-a-newspaper prayer.
  • p. 215: "We could even designate it 'Ethel,' for on the phone" — code-naming as the boys' native tongue (cf. "Please commit a crime").
  • p. 216: "feeling the way W. Penn in his Quaker Oats hat... must have felt trading a few trinkets" — Pemulis's self-congratulation, with the colonial irony fully loaded against him given who the Antitois turn out to be.
  • pp. 216-217: "his tiny older brother, who resembles him the way creatures of the same Order but not the same Family might resemble one another" — Hal's posture "subtly but warmly inclined" toward head-rigged Mario; fathers-sons/disability warmth amid the scheming.
  • p. 218: "a kind of pale sweet aura, a luminescence.... Halation, Axford observed." — with n.76, the single best key to Hal's psychology this side of scene 001.

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