Jim Struck
Jim Struck (full name given as James Albrecht Lockley Struck Jr.) is a mid-pack Enfield Tennis Academy upperclassman — a transfer student with "nine years in at three different academies," clinging to the boys' 18-and-Under A-squad by sheer tenacity despite a serve deLint likened to a debutante's curtsy. He is defined less by tennis than by three things: a bad case of cystic acne he is forever picking at, an academic-probation record going back to age fifteen, and a compulsive, almost artisanal habit of plagiarism. Within Michael Pemulis's underground urine-and-services economy Struck runs the published-source plagiarism and Xerography desk; he is a chip-in co-owner of the group's reconditioned tow truck; and he does the real library legwork that pins down what the drug DMZ actually is. On his good days he is a scholarly, deadpan Big Buddy tactician his young charges revere, and the Academy's designated teller of E.T.A. lore.
The little backstory the book gives is bleak and comic at once: a red-wine-and-Quaalude father whose drunken dive into a drained backyard pool left him in a lifelong neck brace and the family in "incredible bitterness and family trauma," after which young Struck was shipped through a string of boarding academies, arriving at E.T.A. dumped from a barely-slowing Lincoln, booted from his prior school over an escaped pet tarantula named Simone. Across the book's three November weeks he is mostly ensemble texture — locker-room bull sessions, the Port Washington trip, dinner-table food-poaching — until two set-pieces give him the frame to himself: on Interdependence Day he gets blackout-drunk on spiked Gatorade and sleeps insensibly through the entire Eschaton catastrophe, and on the night of 11 November the novel's longest look at him watches him semi-plagiarize a wine-addled scholar's essay on the Wheelchair Assassins, copying "hurl himself athwart" verbatim into his own term paper. The dating notes carry three contradictions as printed.
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Arc
Jim Struck survives institutional adolescence by running everything through other people's words. The diagnosis arrives embedded in his big scene and radiates backward through everything else: congenital plagiarists, Hal observes, do more work hiding the theft than honesty would cost, because the problem isn't laziness but navigational insecurity — the need to know somebody has crossed this ground before you. So Struck plagiarizes prose for Poutrincourt and plagiarizes it professionally for Pemulis's clients; his party trick is a stunt of pre-loaded theater (the ankle-weights revealed only after the win); even his social role as the Academy's raconteur is curatorial — the Clipperton legend he "specializes in" is someone else's story, glued to his door like a citation. His single genuine intellectual triumph in the book is, fittingly, an act of finding rather than making: it is Struck who runs DMZ to ground in the B.U. Pharmacy stacks, off a footnote, establishing the pharmacology on which the novel's darkest plot thread turns. The plagiarist is the crew's best researcher. The skill was always real; only the authorship was ever missing.
The book is equally clear about where the insecurity comes from and what it costs. Behind him stands the book's tidiest emblem of addicted parenthood: a father who dove, drunk, into a pool with nothing in it — a neck brace for life, a bitter house, a boy shipped through three academies by parents whose Lincoln would not even fully stop to lose him. Ahead of him, the inheritance is already arriving: Struck is the substance-clique regular whose fallout is only thinly disguised, and on Interdependence Day he becomes the one E.T.A. student for whom the Eschaton catastrophe — the novel's set-piece about children's games collapsing into real violence — simply does not exist, because he has drunk himself out of the afternoon in which it happened. Cleared of blame "strictly from spectation": the verdict is an acquittal and an indictment in the same phrase. And yet the book declines to make him merely pathetic. In V.R.8, formal and deadpan before his Little Buddies, ruling on kertwangs and water-jugs, Struck is briefly the thing the whole borrowed apparatus impersonates — someone worth listening to, revered for a scholarly detachment that is, for once, his own. That the book's last glimpse of him is astringent on the jaw and a scheme about sequestered Quebecois girls only completes the picture: unchanged, incorrigible, mid-pack — a minor character in exactly the way the novel finds most worth recording, ruined gently and daily by needing the ground pre-mapped.
Timeline (16 events)
Key to the timeline
Events are ordered by when they happen in the story, not by where they fall in the book's pages.
★ marks a pivotal event — one that carries this character's arc. Unmarked events add texture around it.
Where an event says how it is known, that basis is one of: narrated (the narration states it), recalled (a character's own memory), reported (secondhand or testimony), claimed (asserted by someone with a stake), or disputed (conflicting versions). Conflicting details are quoted as the book has them rather than resolved.
Dating notes (apparatus)
Kept as printed throughout; event numbers are this page's own numbering.
- Hometown contradiction (events 1-2; carried unresolved). Scene 036 introduces him as "James Albrecht Lockley Struck Jr. of Orinda CA"; n304 places "Jim's own childhood in Rancho Mirage." Orinda (S.F. Bay Area) and Rancho Mirage (Palm Springs desert) are both California but not the same place. A family move would reconcile them but is nowhere stated; recorded as textual tension, not adjudicated.
- Middle-initial variance (carried unresolved). "James Albrecht Lockley Struck Jr." / "J. A. L. Struck Jr." (036, 073, n304) vs "J. G. Struck" (126) vs "J. L. Struck" (183). The quotes in events 14 and 16 preserve the variant forms as written.
- Academy drift, plausibly consistent. 036: "nine years in at three different academies"; n304 names the first (Rolling Hills, post accident); 102 names the last before E.T.A. (Palmer, the tarantula expulsion). These read cleanly as Rolling Hills → Palmer → E.T.A., but the text never states the chain — logged, not resolved.
- The two n110 rosters (5) are distinct. The duBois-sharing circle is Hal/Pemulis/Struck/Troeltsch + "sometimes B. Boone"; Schacht and sometimes Stice warm up the tow truck; the wider supper-gala list adds Axford and Schacht. These two groups are not the same.
- Undated origins (1-2). Both narrated post-hoc (n304 biographical aside; 102 August-YDAU recollection); no year in the story exists for the father's accident or the E.T.A. transfer. Stamps left UNDATED rather than invented.
- 11 Nov clustering (13-15). Library run (afternoon, on the "wet-haired after their P.M. runs" cue), 1810h dinner, 2030h term paper — consistent as a single day's sequence; 126's exact clock is not given beyond the montage's "at just this moment."
- Room designation. n304 locates him in 308 Subdorm B, rooming with Shaw and Pemberton; 138's "Struck and Shaw's room" is consistent. (The Pemberton who takes a ball in the eye in n110 is the same C-squadder.)
- Eschaton corroboration (10). 073 (the event) and 154 (the blame post-mortem) agree he was insensible throughout; no dispute.
What links here
- Scene 032: locker room quiz
- Scene 034: locker room big buddies
- Scene 036: big buddy sessions
- Scene 067: bus ride home pwta
- Scene 073: eschaton debacle
- Scene 081: marios onantiad gaudeamus
- Scene 094: dawn drills second world
- Scene 122: eta supper stice hal
- Scene 126: simultaneity montage
- Scene 183: locker room loach saga
- Scene n304: struck plagiarizes afr train cult
- Scene 048: urine day
- Scene 053: madame psychosis show
- Scene 057: dmz show and tell
- Scene 065: port washington meet
- Scene 084: stice bed lyle objects
- Scene 086: concavity cabinet clipperton
- Scene 102: tavis waiting room
- Scene 132: hal vr6 wave bye bye
- Scene 138: blood sister viewing
- Scene 154: mario bolex avril sadness
- Scene 165: hal blizzard anhedonia
- Scene 167: stice stuck to window
- Scene n110: orin hal phone
- Scene n321: hal pemulis dmz quitting