Scene 123: steeply father mash
Characters present
Characters referenced
Themes
Open questions this scene bears on
Connects to
- Scene 007: attache receives cartridge
- Scene 011: attache still watching
- Scene 014: attache wets recliner
- Scene 025: attache wife watches
- Scene 028: attache room fills
- Scene 029: marathe steeply entertainment
- Scene 031: marathe steeply duplessis
- Scene 033: desert dusk interstitial
- Scene 035: marathe steeply temple
- Scene 038: marathe steeply disguises
- Scene 059: subsidized time chronology
- Scene 072: marathe steeply choosing
- Scene 077: marathe steeply betrayal
- Scene 088: marathe steeply soup
- Scene 096: p terminals rivers of reward
- Scene 098: master copies temptation
- Scene 101: entertainment casualties
- Scene 124: gompert day billowing shape
- Scene 127: delint steeply seeing
Summary
Dawn ends the long mountainside night: Steeply, facing out over the desert, tells Marathe an uncharacteristically uncalculated personal anecdote — how his own father, a heating-oil dispatcher in Troy NY, was consumed "sometime around midlife" not by the samizdat but by a plain old broadcast television program, MAS*H. The attachment progresses with horrible gradualness — Thursday-night ritual, syndication bombardment, a secret notebook, hostile letters mailed to the fictional Major Burns at a Seoul routing code, baroque apocalypse-theories about hidden codes of death and time, a secret explicatory book in indecipherable manuscript — until the father refuses to leave his den and dies in his easy chair, at full Recline, mid-episode. Marathe, checking his watch and his disappointingly small shadow, supplies choric one-line diagnoses ("The organism of family simply shifted to accommodate... This is unbalance"), while privately unable to decide whether the demeanor of this suddenly younger-seeming Steeply is performance. The installment closes on the Entertainment of now: Steeply rejects "empty of intent" for the victims' eyes — they look stuck, fixed, trapped "in some sort of middle. Between two things. Pulled apart in different directions" — and the dialogue dissolves, mid-exchange, into the Ennet House conversation of scene 124. The anecdote is the book's clearest demonstration that the Entertainment only perfects an appetite American spectation already had.
What to notice
The master of fabricated selves tells exactly one apparently unperformed story in the whole book — and notice that Marathe spends the scene unable to decide whether even this is performance, the frame staying operational at maximum candor. The anecdote's real work is a proof: a plain broadcast sitcom, decades before the samizdat, produces the complete pathology — gradual immersion, the "secrecy about the notebook, and the secrecy about the secrecy", family reorganizing around the den, the recliner-death that makes the father the medical attaché avant la lettre. The Entertainment is a difference of degree, not kind; the appetite precedes the weapon. Notice that the anecdote also maps point-for-point onto substance addiction, down to the codependent mother's pharmaceutical asterisk and denial's flat last word ("It was a transmural infarction."). The staging deflates its own mythology: dawn shrinks Marathe's county-sized shadow of the serial's start to "pathetic and small". And the closing diagnosis of the victims' eyes — "Stuck. Fixed. Held. Trapped." — pulled apart between two things — then dissolves, mid-exchange and without a seam, into an Ennet House conversation about depression: the book quietly equating the entertainment void and the clinical one.
Beats
- p. 638: caps header 1 MAY Y.D.A.U.; Steeply's scratch now ugly and puffed; the whiter band on his finger — "a university ring, or more probably a wedding band," removed — and the unfixed "annular pallor" that "seemed curious to Marathe"; "My own father... We watched him get consumed with a sort of entertainment."
- p. 639: "nothing like this sort of Entertainment — a plain old television program"; MAS*H "an acronym, not a command"; Thursdays at 2100h, supper on a tray, Mummykins teasing — "It seemed almost cute"; Steeply volunteers a files-tidbit for M. Fortier (Steeply, H.H.: late father a Cheery Oil dispatcher, Troy NY); then syndication — old episodes chopped, loaded with ads, running daily on two Capital District stations — "I think this was the start."
- p. 640: a small TV kept down at the distributorship; the gradual immersion — quits the bowling league, drops out of Knights of Columbus, hunched "head out, as if pulled toward the screen"; Marathe grimly recognizes the viewing posture from his second-oldest brother and the Canadiens of the N.L. of H.
- p. 641: ugly if he missed even one episode; "The organism of family simply shifted to accommodate"; the notebook appears — "the secrecy about the notebook, and the secrecy about the secrecy"; Marathe names the crazy-making gradualness: the watcher of the obsessed comes to doubt his own balance; Marathe angles his chair to find his shadow blunt, deformed, "pathetic and small" — no Bröckengespenstphänom at dawn.
- pp. 641-642: the father quotes scenes to make conversational points, then can't converse at all "without some system of references to the program"; kitchen = Mess Tent, den = the Swamp; rents films for cameo appearances; buys a "Betamixer" (n.263) and tapes all 29 weekly airings, cross-referenced in baroque non-date systems; moves his bedding to the den; views all night with a crude white earplug, scribbling.
- p. 642: dawn description — the sun "slowly exhaled" from the Rincons, light "the vague red of a type of fond sentiment"; Steeply's standing shadow cast back close enough for Marathe to touch; "It sometimes from somewhere blue occurred to Marathe that he did not dislike this Steeply, though like or respect would be too far in going, to say."
- p. 643: Mummykins finds letters in the garbage addressed to Major Burns — not to the actor Maury Linville, but to the character, at "an involved military address, with a Seoul routing code"; the letters "hostile, savage, and lavishly descriptive"; Burns as embodiment of an Armageddon-theme assembling itself across the seasons; Burns/"burns" = "the consuming fire of apocalypse"; she never mentions them — just leaves them around where the kids will see.
- pp. 643-644: missing whole weeks of work; Mo Cheery views tapes with him, then collars Mummykins in the garage — the old man is "in a high-angle psychic nose-dive"; she acts as if she has no idea what Mo means; "Mumkinsky being a type of pet family name," Steeply says, embarrassed.
- p. 644: the theories metastasize — coded communication "about an end to our familiar type of world-time and the advent of a whole different order of world-time"; the Police Action lasted two-odd years, the show was in its seventh; "baroquoco" theories about what "really" happened to departed characters.
- pp. 644-645: letters now mailed, returned stamped undeliverable from absurd addresses; "Mummykins was uncomplaining throughout... She did, granted, begin taking prescription anti-anxiety medication"; Marathe's unsaid "Land of the freely brave"; the secret book "that revised and explicated much of the world's military, medical, philosophical and religious history" by MAS*H thematics; oil customers complain of bizarre theoretical discussions.
- p. 645: the B.S. 1983 double blow — attorneys for CBS and Fox cite letters of "grave concern," and the final episode runs; the father refuses to leave the den ("As in even to go to the bathroom, now," p. 646).
- p. 646: A.C.D.C. cable for extra syndication, tapes running constantly, haggard and spectral; he dies in the chair at full Recline during the episode where Alda's sleepwalking Hawkeye is reassured that if he were truly crazy he'd sleep like the notorious Burns; scores of notebooks tumble from a forced closet — the manuscript in indecipherable medical/military code; Marathe's moral ("An otherwise harmless U.S.A. broadcast television program took his life") is flatly refused: "No. It was a transmural infarction." "The obsessed frequently endure."
- p. 646: sunrise full: "All was calm. All was bright" (Silent Night, deadpan); Steeply admits the temptation — "part of both the horror and the pull" — when he thinks of Flatto's lab; "I kind of half-picture Hank Hoyne in the old man's old recliner, hunched and scribbling feverishly"; the eyes were alike.
- pp. 646-647: heat shimmer; Tucson resumes "the appearance of the mirage"; Marathe asks Steeply to depart first — pride about concealing how he gets up and down; Steeply squats to adjust the straps of his high heels, prostheses misaligned.
- p. 647: the closing exchange on the victims' eyes — Dick Willis's "empty of intent" doesn't capture it; not inanimate, "More like the opposite... Stuck. Fixed. Held. Trapped. As in trapped in some sort of middle. Between two things. Pulled apart in different directions."
- pp. 647-648: Marathe: "Meaning between different cravings of great intensity, this" — and the reply ("Not even cravings so much. Emptier than that... As if there was something he'd forgotten") begins the seamless dissolve into scene 124 (see Connections).
Themes in this scene
- Entertainment and the Self: the thesis installment — a pre-digital, non-lethal Entertainment produces the full pathology (immersion, withdrawal from life, the recliner-death, the stuck eyes), arguing the samizdat is a difference of degree, not kind; the appetite precedes the weapon.
- Fathers and Sons: Steeply, the master of fabricated selves, has exactly one apparently unperformed self — the son reconstructing his father's nose-dive from a college dorm and a kid sister's reports; the heating-oil father consumed in his den mirrors and inverts JOI, the father who made the consuming thing.
- Addiction and Recovery: the anecdote maps point-for-point onto substance addiction — gradual tolerance, secrecy about the secrecy, family accommodation (Mummykins as textbook codependent on "prescription anti-anxiety medication"), failed intervention talk, terminal denial ("It was a transmural infarction").
- Communication and Solipsism: the father ends able to converse only "by analogies to" a fictional world — letters to a character who doesn't exist, a life's testament in code no one can read; the family never names the thing out loud.
- Surveillance and Disguise: even at maximum candor the frame is operational — Steeply volunteers the anecdote's vitals as "a tidbit for M. Fortier," Marathe must weigh whether the younger-seeming demeanor is "part of some performance beyond Marathe," and the makeup has hardened overnight into "a mask of a mentally ill clown."
Connections
Backward
- Serial continuity: same night as scenes 029/031/033/035/038/072/077/088/096/098 etc.; this is the sunrise end-stage (Marathe's giant entrancing shadow from the serial's start — cf. the Bröckengespenstphänom installments — has shrunk to "pathetic and small," p. 641).
- Hank Hoyne and Flatto's lab: directly continues the B.S.S. Entertainment-casualty material of scenes 098 (pp. 489-491, Master-copy temptation, Flatto's holography/density theories) and 101 (pp. 507-508, Hoyne "empty of intent" — phrase here attributed to Dick Willis and found wanting).
- The recliner-death replays the medical attaché's recliner (scenes 007/011/014/025/028) — viewer fixed in the chair, family organizing around the screen; the MAS*H father is the attaché avant la lettre.
- "An acronym, not a command" — boyhood confusion over whether the title MAS*H ordered you to mash; cf. the book's running anxiety about what entertainment commands its viewer to do.
- The father's theories of "a whole different order of world-time" land ironically in a novel where time itself has been sold (Subsidized Time, scene 059); apocalypse-by-entertainment is precisely the A.F.R.'s plan being negotiated on this mountainside.
Forward
- The 123→124 dissolve (deliberate, Wallace's seam): the scene's last exchange runs without any break into scene 124 — "Not even cravings so much. Emptier than that... 'Misplaced. Lost.' 'Misplaced.' 'Lost.' 'Misplaced.' 'As you wish.'" (p. 648) — and only then does the 13 NOVEMBER header cut to Kate Gompert and Geoffrey Day at Ennet House discussing the same phenomenology of inner horror. The archive's 123/124 scene division falls inside this dissolve; scene 124's first ~5 dialogue lines are shared tissue with this scene. Read the closing lines as completing Marathe/Steeply and as overture to Gompert/Day: stuck-between-cravings (Entertainment victims) blends into Day's billowing shape (psychotic depression) — Wallace equating the two voids.
- Steeply's removed band (p. 638) sits with the wife of his tennis memories (scene 127, p. 658) and the "recent divorce" of the Marital-Leave material (scene 035, p. 107; scene 077, p. 375).
- Endnote n.263 (p. 1046): one line — "Sic, presumably for Betamax (®Sony)" — flagging Steeply's "Betamixer" as the narrator's sic; n.264 (p. 1046): "Sic, but it's pretty obvious what Marathe means here," re Marathe's "recircling" for recycling. Both notes certify that the dialogue's errors are the characters' own.
Notable passages
- p. 638: "It seemed curious to Marathe that Steeply would undergo electrolysis but not take trouble to fix his finger's annular pallor" — the ring's white circle: annularity stamped on the disguised body; anchor passage for surveillance-disguise.
- p. 640: "The gradual immersion. The withdrawal from life." — the anecdote's whole arc in two fragments; entertainment as addiction, plainly.
- p. 641: "the secrecy about the notebook, and the secrecy about the secrecy" — recursive concealment; cf. Hal's Pump Room secrecy-attachment (scene 013).
- p. 643: the Major Burns letters paragraph ("hostile, savage, and lavishly descriptive... a Seoul routing code") — the collapse of fiction/reality distinctions; entertainment-self's terminal stage.
- p. 645: "It was enough to break your heart. She was a rock. She did, granted, begin taking prescription anti-anxiety medication." — American stoicism with a pharmaceutical asterisk; followed by Marathe's swallowed "Land of the freely brave."
- p. 646: "He died in his easy chair, set at full Recline" — the recliner-death image binding the father to the attaché and every Entertainment victim.
- p. 647: "Stuck. Fixed. Held. Trapped. As in trapped in some sort of middle. Between two things. Pulled apart in different directions." — the book's diagnosis of its victims' eyes; essential anthology passage, and the hinge of the dissolve into Gompert/Day.
What links here
- All Marathe/Steeply mountainside dialogues and most of the AFR material are post-1993 additions; the germ, however, dates to 1986.
- The Marathe/Steeply "samizdat" vocabulary was still unsettled at galley stage…
- Recent divorce; the personal Marital Leave
- Steeply's father and the M*A*S*H obsession — attachment as the shared theme
- Steeply's father consumed by "M*A*S*H"; the madness and the death
- The A.F.R.'s Entertainment posture on the mountainside: Read-Only copies, testing losses, and "the theories of content irrelevant"
- The Office's own casualties — Hank Hoyne and the intern lost to the samizdat
- The cost of studying it — U.S.O.U.S.'s testing losses: the intern and Hank Hoyne
- The technical-interview craft — silence as method; the "M*A*S*H" confession
- Why it's lethal — the open mechanism: holography-density, the p-terminal analogy, "empty of intent"
- Scene 072: marathe steeply choosing
- Scene 077: marathe steeply betrayal
- Scene 088: marathe steeply soup
- Scene 096: p terminals rivers of reward
- Scene 124: gompert day billowing shape
- Scene 127: delint steeply seeing
- Scene 128: steeply bain correspondence
- Scene 130: hal stice bleachers etoile doom
- Gompert and Day and the billowing shape
- Kate Gompert, Day, and the billowing shape
- Kate Gompert, Day, and the billowing shape — "when Mr. Bouncety-Bounce appears in his…"
- Kate and Day and the billowing shape (p. 648)
- Marathe & Steeply, the father and M*A*S*H
- Marathe & Steeply, the father and M*A*S*H (pp. 639–640)
- Marathe & Steeply, the father and M*A*S*H — "This unless this was part of…"
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (Fathers and Sons)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (Ghosts and Wraiths)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (p. 638)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (p. 639)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (p. 641)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (p. 642)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (p. 646)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (pp. 638–639)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (pp. 640–641)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (pp. 642–647)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (pp. 644–645)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H (pp. 647–648)
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H — "And I kind of half-picture Hank…"
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H — "He died in his easy chair…"
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H — "He died just before his birthday…"
- Steeply's father and M*A*S*H — "I think you’re right, that it’s…"
- a House still spiritually palsied
- a House still spiritually palsied — "Cartridges not allowed after 0000h., to…"
- a man who could only speak through a fiction · S6
- a man who could only speak through a fiction — "the letters were addressed to Major…" · S6
- dinner-table talk (pp. 638–639)
- supper at the best table: the boy afraid of the weights
- the final enclosing isolation of obsession
- the final enclosing isolation of obsession — "This, the final enclosing isolation of…"
- the gradual immersion, the withdrawal from life
- the organism of family shifts to accommodate
- the organism of family shifts to accommodate — "The whole organism of family becomes…"
- the secrecy about the secrecy
- the secrecy about the secrecy (pp. 640–641)
- who can sleep, and when
- who can sleep, and when — "Sober cocaine- and stimulant-addicts sleep pretty…"