Scene 089: clipperton suicide
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Summary
The end of the Clipperton legend begun at pp. 407-410: the Glock-wielding unaffiliated kid spends his last pre-Subsidized season collecting trophies the U.S.T.A. refuses to treat as real, until the Year of the Whopper's new O.N.A.N.T.A. data-cruncher — who "knew from exactly zilch except for crunching raw results-data" — innocently sanctions his record and the first trilingual North American Junior Tennis lists him #1. Days later Clipperton materializes at E.T.A.'s portcullis, wrecked and with no gear in sight, pleading for counsel; Mario gets him admitted, and James Incandenza — lucid, "a very low melting-point of compassion for traumas connected with early success" — takes him and Bolex-rigged Mario up to an unused Subdorm C room, where Clipperton produces the altered ranking sheet, a sepia wedding snapshot, and the Glock, and "blows his legitimated brains out for real and all time, eradicates his map and then some." Mario, who never tells Hal or the Moms what he witnessed, insists on cleaning the room alone, all night, falling and picking himself up; the spotless locked room becomes the Clipperton Suite, where Schtitt sends whingeing juniors to meditate on "the other ways to succeed besides votaried self-transcendence... and hard daily slogging toward a distant goal you can then maybe, if you get there, live with."
What to notice
Told as academy lore, in communal retrospect — and then the mask slips: "of whom I think we can presume" puts a first-person narrator inside what read as institutional memory, one of the book's quietest narratological shocks. The causality of the death is carried by a single word: Clipperton "blows his legitimated brains out for real and all time, eradicates his map and then some" — legitimated is the killer; the unreal wins were survivable, the sanctioned #1 is not. Notice that the fatal ranking is a pure map-artifact, conjured by a data-cruncher with no contact whatsoever with the territory of actual play — the book's map/territory theme executed as bureaucratic accident. Notice too who the boy comes to: past his oblivious parents to a not-quite-sober JOI, whose compassion for early-success trauma is autobiographical, two years before his own suicide — a man counseling the disease that will kill him. And the aftermath belongs to Mario: the all-night solo cleanup, the 18's girls listening to him fall and pick himself up, again and again — the book's gentlest body assigned its most gruesome work, and never telling Hal or the Moms what he saw. Schtitt's conversion of the sealed room into pedagogy gives the legend its moral: goals you can, if you get there, live with.
Beats
- pp. 430-431: the paradox of Clipperton's last pre-Subsidized year — a mantel of U.S.T.A. trophies and no ranking at all, the Glock-extorted wins officially unreal; he confides only in Mario at the post-final buffets; the tactic that wins keeps the wins (and Clipperton) "from being treated as real."
- p. 431: O.N.A.N. and Subsidized Time arrive in his eighteenth summer; the barely-English-speaking Mexican systems analyst at Forest Lawn NNY treats six spring titles as sanctioned; NAJT prints E. R. Clipperton, Home Town 'Ind.', #1 Boys' Continental 18s; E.T.A. is "highly amused" and Pemulis makes a killing on vig booking wagers on whether he'll show at the Clays (n.175: the Glock-and-NAJT masturbation image's "both-hands-full logistics" — "realism wasn't really the point... for the bitter Brigade boys").
- pp. 431-432: two days before Indy, Clipperton appears at the portcullis in a frayed trench coat, gearless — "not even his Glock 17's custom-made wooden case," though the Glock itself rides concealed in the coat until p. 433 — and "in a terrible way"; Mario sways down through warm rain, interfaces through the bars, and personally lobbies L. A. Moore, prorector Cantrell, and the Headmaster; the attendant from the halfway place gets "sobriety's worst fantods, so far" off Clipperton's haunted stare at the wrought-iron racquet-head spikes.
- p. 432: Himself — "not quite strictly sober" but lucid — overrides Cantrell's and Schtitt's objections when it emerges Clipperton wants only private counsel from Incandenza Sr. (of whom, the narrator's 'I' presumes, Mario has spoken glowingly); the three go up at high noon to an unused top-floor Subdorm C room for "some sort of psycho-existential CPR-session"; Mario has never spoken of what he sat in on, not even to Hal at night.
- pp. 432-433: Rusk beeped and canceled; Lateral Alice sent to fetch Lyle (delotusing from the dispenser, his upright walk across the grounds causing student-snapshot excitement); Himself requires the session digitally recorded on Mario's head-clamped Bolex H128 to protect E.T.A. from O.N.A.N.T.A.'s "Kafkaesque rules on unregistered recipients of any sort of counsel."
- p. 433: with Lyle in transit, Clipperton produces from his wet coat an elaborately altered NAJT ranking report, a sepia snapshot of "some whey-faced Midwestern couple's wedding," and the Glock 17, and — right temple, his good stick-hand, eyes scrunched — fires; the Incandenzas stagger out "all green-gilled and red-mist-stained," preserved in snapshots (meant to catch Lyle walking) as "resembling miners of some sort of really grisly coal."
- p. 433: the poorly attended funeral — Clipperton hailed from Crawfordsville IN; the tranquilized mother and blind father had bought his story that the trophies came from a job designing tennis trophies; interment in Veedersburg's budget cemetery; Himself skips Indianapolis, takes Mario (his first funeral), and accedes to Mario's request that nothing be filmed for the jr.-tennis documentary.
- pp. 433-434: Mario — having probably told only Lyle everything — insists no one else clean the scene after Enfield's Finest chalk "a chalk ectoplasm" and the EMTs leave; it takes the bradykinetic boy all night and two bottles of Ajax Plus, the 18's girls hearing him fall and pick himself up, again and again; the spotless room locked ever since: the Clipperton Suite, Schtitt's standing object lesson for whingers.
Themes in this scene
- The Body and Tennis: the terminal case of E.T.A.'s core warning — a #1 reached without the votaried process is uninhabitable; Schtitt converts the corpse-room into pedagogy about plateaux, slogging, and goals "you can then maybe, if you get there, live with."
- Depression and Anhedonia: Clipperton's blackly haunted glumness at the very summit; getting the craved thing reveals it as nothing — the achievement-despair version of the anhedonia the book elsewhere maps clinically.
- Maps and Territory: "eradicates his map and then some" — the Eschaton/street idiom for self-erasure made literal; and the ranking itself is a pure map-artifact, conjured by a data-cruncher with no contact with the territory of actual play.
- Film and Optics: the suicide is accidentally documentary — Himself's Bolex condition makes Mario record it; the funeral's no-filming request and the grisly-miners snapshots measure what should and shouldn't be captured.
- Fathers and Sons: Clipperton bypasses his oblivious biological parents to seek a father's counsel from Incandenza Sr., whose compassion for early-success trauma is autobiographical; Mario as the son who mediates, witnesses, and cleans up after.
Connections
Backward
- LaMont Chu's fame-hunger consultation with Lyle (pp. 387-390, scene 082 territory) is the live, low-grade form of the same disease Clipperton dies of; Schtitt's Clipperton Suite is the institutional answer Chu never gets from Rusk.
Forward
- Direct continuation of the Clipperton legend introduced at pp. 407-410 (scene 086); the Fresno cyanide-Quik case (pp. 436-437, scene 091) is its stated companion in the lore of "unprepared-goal-attaintment-trauma" (sic).
- The map idiom binds three worlds: Clipperton "eradicates his map" (p. 433), Eschaton's rules row has Pemulis warning that Ingersoll would "eliminate Eschaton's map for keeps" (p. 339, scene 073), and Boston AA newcomers arrive "ready to eliminate your map" (p. 446, scene 092).
- JOI counsels a suicidal boy through success-despair two years before his own 1 April YTSDB self-deletion — and is "already in and out of rehabs and hardly a credible source on much of anything"; Mario's "two funerals so far" quietly counts Himself's.
- Mario's all-night solo cleanup of human ruin sits two pages from Gately's five-A.M.s-a-week version at the Shattuck — on the 0430h Green Line whether he's just off all-night Staff duty or not (pp. 434-436, scene 090) — the book pairing its two caretaker-innocents scrubbing what others can't look at.
- The halfway-house portcullis attendant ("sobriety's worst fantods") is an early thread of the E.T.A.–Ennet House staffing connection (cf. the towel-cart girl at drills, pp. 457-458, scene 094, and Gately's world generally).
- Pemulis's odds-software killing (p. 431) is the earliest of his money schemes on record; the O.N.A.N.T.A. bureaucracy's "Kafkaesque rules" recur in the urine-testing crisis (nn.324/332).
Notable passages
- p. 431: "the very tactic that let him win in the first place kept the wins, and in a way Clipperton himself, from being treated as real" — the legend's whole logic in one clause.
- p. 432: "of whom I think we can presume Mario's spoken glowingly" — the communal narrator's startling first-person 'I' (often read as Hal's narration); narratological anchor.
- p. 433: "blows his legitimated brains out for real and all time, eradicates his map and then some" — the kill-line; 'legitimated' carrying the entire causality.
- p. 433: "resembling miners of some sort of really grisly coal" — the snapshot image of the stained Incandenzas.
- p. 434: "the other ways to succeed besides votaried self-transcendence and gut-sucking-in and hard daily slogging toward a distant goal you can then maybe, if you get there, live with" — Schtitt's moral; anchor passage for the-body-tennis.
What links here
- Clipperton appears at the E.T.A. portcullis, seeking counsel
- Clipperton's award-ceremony mutterings to Mario
- Clipperton's funeral — Mario's smile through tears; nothing filmed
- Clipperton's suicide at E.T.A. — Mario admits him and records it
- Crawfordsville origins: the Valium mother, the blinded paddle-ball father
- JOI counsels and witnesses Eric Clipperton's on-grounds suicide
- Keeper of the Clipperton Suite; the cautionary saga
- Lyle summoned to the Clipperton crisis; the campus sensation of Lyle walking (uncanny, unresolved)
- Mario cleans the Clipperton room alone all night
- Mario cleans the room alone; the sealed Clipperton Suite
- Subsidized Time arrives; the O.N.A.N.T.A. computer ranks him #1
- The Clipperton crisis: beeped by Himself — and canceled in favor of Lyle
- The Clipperton legend and the Clipperton Suite — the cautionary saga and the counselor mandate
- The Clipperton wagering: bookmaking with PowerBook and odds-software
- The funeral at Veedersburg IN; Mario's unfaltering smile
- The locker-room betting: will he even materialize at Indy
- The recorded counsel session; Clipperton kills himself
- The unarmed award ceremonies; a mantel of trophies and no ranking at all
- Scene 086: concavity cabinet clipperton
- Scene 090: gately shattuck janitor
- Scene 091: fresno quik subsidized time
- Scene 092: gately higher power bob death
- Scene 127: delint steeply seeing
- Scene 135: anhedonia and it
- Scene 179: hal accomplice blizzard weston
- Scene n321: hal pemulis dmz quitting
- Clipperton's suicide
- Clipperton's suicide (p. 431)
- Clipperton's suicide (pp. 430–431)
- Clipperton's suicide — "Clipperton pulls out of various pockets…"
- Clipperton's suicide — "blows his legitimated brains out for…"
- Marathe and Steeply: the soup and the free choice
- Marathe and Steeply: the soup and the free choice — "Perhaps the facts are true, after…"
- The end of the Clipperton legend
- The end of the Clipperton legend (Film and Optics)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (ii)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (p. 431)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (p. 432)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (p. 433)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (p. 434)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (pp. 431–432)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (pp. 432–433)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (pp. 433–434)
- asking, between only the two of them
- not quite strictly sober, in and out of rehabs
- not quite strictly sober, in and out of rehabs — "Himself was already in and out…"
- reached through the bars, and still wordless
- reached through the bars, and still wordless — "Clipperton stares wordlessly up at the…"
- sobriety's worst fantods at the gate
- sobriety's worst fantods at the gate — "the spectral trench-coated figure had given…"
- the Clipperton Suite: he dies the moment the ranking is legitimated
- the Clipperton Suite: the corpse-room converted into curriculum
- the Clipperton Suite: the institution refuses to count him
- the Clipperton Suite: the ranking computer, fed raw data, makes him #1
- the Clipperton Suite: the trophy is a little metal serving body
- the Clipperton Suite: the winning tactic keeps the wins from being real
- the Clipperton funeral aftermath
- the U.S.T.A.→O.N.A.N.T.A. hinge
- the trophy nobody can let be real
- the trophy nobody can let be real — "the very tactic that let him…"