Scene 090: gately shattuck janitor
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Summary
Five mornings a week, on top of overnight Staff duty, Gately rides three trains by 0430h to "sunlight on the side" (Annie P.'s coinage) as a janitor at the Shattuck Shelter For Homeless Males: hosing feces off the shower tiling from a distance before going in with mop, solvents, and face-mask. His partner-boss Stavros Lobokulas bills the Commonwealth for eight hours, pays Gately three sub-table, and dreams aloud of parlaying halfway-house cheap labor into an upscale women's shoe store. The shelter is a catalog of terminal addiction and damage — D.T.s, colostomy bags, the sperm corner, always one or two guys Gately knows personally from his B&E days, "25–30 and look 45–60... a better ad for sobriety at any cost than any ad agency could come up with." Gately shuts his head off at 0459.9h, screens input with a vengeance, slips a finski or some quiet AA to the ones who seem ready, and rides the Greenie home "with his Gratitude-battery totally recharged."
What to notice
The scene quietly deputizes the reader: the toilets' cleanliness "might seem surprising until you head into the shower area, with your equipment and face-mask" — the generic second person of AA testimony reassigned to a mop, so the Shattuck tour happens on your shift. Notice how completely the shelter is staged as spectation — D.T. cases "treat the heaters like TVs", the night supervisors run soft-core behind the desk, the stragglers watch the feces-hosing "like a sport" and yell advice — while the one man actually working screens input with a vengeance: Gately's sobriety is drawn here as a discipline of not-watching, extending even to inference, to what he "very much needs to assume" about the shoe catalogues. And Stavros's thirteen-month witticism is crueler than he registers: you cannot tell men in a homeless shelter to "just go home". They are.
Beats
- p. 434: Annie P.'s "sunlights on the side"; the 0430h Inbound Green Line plus two trains to bombed-out Jamaica Plain; the work itself — anti-fungal delousing of cot floors and walls, toilets, and the shower area requiring equipment, mask, and a preliminary industrial hose ("human waste in the showers on a daily fucking basis").
- pp. 434-435: Stavros Lobokulas — long cigarette-filter, the enormous collection of women's-shoes catalogues behind the truck seats (Gately "very much needs to assume" he only browses); the billing scam (3 hours done, 8 billed); Stavros's afternoon at Pine Street Inn with other "broke and desperate yutzes" cruised from halfway houses.
- p. 435: the inmates' inventory — schizophrenia the norm, D.T.s guys treating heaters like TVs, puke-buckets aimed at "like golfers treat the pin," the hidden corner where sperm moves slowly down the walls ("way too much sperm for just one or two guys, either"); "The whole place smells like death no matter what the fuck you do"; Gately's head-switch and vengeance-grade input-screening; the dead-eyed night supervisors his own size who keep offering him a job, and his Thanks Anyway; home by Greenie "with his Gratitude-battery totally recharged."
- p. 435: this was the menial job he landed with three days left on his resident month's deadline, and he's kept it since.
- pp. 435-436: the stragglers who won't clear out by 0500h — the worst guys, clumping behind him to spectate the feces-jetting "like a sport and yelling encouragement"; "a couple have those little shaved patches on their arms" (transdermal-patch users); thrashing and screaming in the cots; reclaiming the sperm corner the minute he's done.
- p. 436: almost always someone he knows from addiction and B&E days — the walking anti-advertisement for using; the finski or pack of Kools and a little quiet AA "if they seem like maybe they're ready to give up"; otherwise the Street-and-Jail stare at a point just behind their heads.
- p. 436: Stavros's great ambition — the upward-mobile women's shoe store ("what is there to really say about ambitious career-dreams involving feet?"); Gately's restitution math and his private doubts about "the spiritual quality of the sobriety involved": Stavros's daily thrown mop and bellowed "Why don't you sorry motherfucks just go home?" — thirteen-plus months of finding himself hilarious.
Themes in this scene
- Addiction and Recovery: Gratitude as a literally rechargeable battery — the program's deliberate use of bottom-rung horror as fuel; the resident menial-work requirement; carrying the message only to the ready; the Shattuck as the Disease's terminal ward, one bad relapse downhill from Ennet House.
- Irony and Sincerity: Stavros's eight chemical-free years with zero spiritual content (the daily 'witticism', the foot-thing) vs. Gately's earnest, unglamorous practice — abstinence vs. recovery; and the inmates as "a better ad for sobriety... than any ad agency could come up with," a line that lands twenty pages after the book's epic of actual ad agencies.
Connections
Backward
- The ad-agency line (p. 436) reads as a deliberate coda to Hal's advertising-history reverie (pp. 410-418, scene 087): the one demand-creating spectacle V&V never devised is the unsponsored sight of end-stage addiction.
- The "little shaved patches" on the stragglers' arms (p. 436) echo n.169's transdermal 'Happy Patches' (scene 088, two scenes earlier) — the drug culture's hardware ambient even here.
- Gately's solitary cleaning of what no one else will face sits directly after Mario's all-night Ajax-scrubbing of the Clipperton room (pp. 433-434, scene 089) — paired caretaker scenes.
- The supervisors' job offers he keeps declining quietly mark how far he's come from taking whatever paid (cf. the Gately/Fackelmann B&E backstory threads, pp. 55-60, scene 016 and the late Gately sections).
Forward
- The Shattuck recurs in scene 092: mopping there is where Gately now hears his childhood Sir Osis "Clopaclopaclop" (p. 449), and the early-shift world supplies the towel-cart Ennet girl at E.T.A. drills (pp. 457-458, scene 094 territory) — the two hill institutions' service economy.
- Gately's restitution-poverty and double-shift exhaustion set up his irreplaceability as live-in Staff (the Lenz-walks era, pp. 539, scene 105ff) and the night everything goes wrong (pp. 601-619, scene 120).
Notable passages
- p. 434: "sunlights on the side" — Annie P.'s coinage; moonlighting inverted for the 0500h shift.
- p. 435: "Gately gets to the shelter at 0459.9h. and just shuts his head off as if his head has a kind of control switch. He screens input with a fucking vengeance" — willed non-spectation as survival discipline; counter-image to the book's passive viewers.
- p. 436: "a better ad for sobriety at any cost than any ad agency could come up with" — anchor passage where the recovery and advertising threads touch.
- p. 436: "Why don't you sorry motherfucks just go home?" — Stavros's thirteen-month witticism; sobriety without compassion, in one repeated joke.
What links here
- Scene 066: ennet living room day gately
- Scene 089: clipperton suicide
- Scene 092: gately higher power bob death
- Scene 118: gately staffer duties
- Scene 175: fackelmann scam wraith returns
- Clipperton saga reflections
- Clipperton's suicide
- Gately janitors at the Shattuck
- Stavros: eight years dry, no recovery in it
- The end of the Clipperton legend (p. 434)
- The end of the Clipperton legend (pp. 433–434)
- carrying the message only to the ready
- the Clipperton funeral aftermath
- the Fresno case: the syndrome the whole academy is built to prevent
- the Fresno saga: deadpan atrocity
- the Gentle Cabinet: Gentle at large — the border tour and the acromegalic infants
- the Gentle Cabinet: Gentle at large — the border tour and the acromegalic infants — "CRANIALLY CHALLENGED, ACROMEGALIC INFANTS LOST IN…"
- the Gentle Cabinet: Gentle at large — the border tour and the acromegalic infants — "WHACKS CHAMPAGNE BOTTLES AGAINST MASSIVE LUCITE…"
- the Gratitude-battery: willed non-spectation as fuel
- the Gratitude-battery: willed non-spectation as fuel — "rides the Greenie back up the…"
- the Shattuck as the Disease's terminal ward
- the Shattuck: a better ad than any agency
- the whole place smells like death
- the whole place smells like death — "The whole place smells like death…"