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Scene 090: gately shattuck janitor

Scene
90
Pages
434–436
When
Fall YDAU (2009), ~Nov; habitual-present narration of Gately's routine as live-in Staff
Where
Shattuck Shelter For Homeless Males, Jamaica Plain (Boston); Green Line commutes; Ennet House between shiftsin: Shattuck Shelter, Jamaica Plain · Enfield Marine Public Health Hospital complex › Ennet House Drug & Alcohol Recovery House (also)
POV
Gately (3rd person, free-indirect)

Characters present

Characters referenced

Connects to (editorial cuts & payoffs, 8)

Summary

Five mornings a week, on top of overnight Staff duty, Gately rides three trains by 0430h to "sunlight on the side" (Annie P.'s coinage) as a janitor at the Shattuck Shelter For Homeless Males: hosing feces off the shower tiling from a distance before going in with mop, solvents, and face-mask. His partner-boss Stavros Lobokulas bills the Commonwealth for eight hours, pays Gately three sub-table, and dreams aloud of parlaying halfway-house cheap labor into an upscale women's shoe store. The shelter is a catalog of terminal addiction and damage — D.T.s, colostomy bags, the sperm corner, always one or two guys Gately knows personally from his B&E days, "25–30 and look 45–60... a better ad for sobriety at any cost than any ad agency could come up with." Gately shuts his head off at 0459.9h, screens input with a vengeance, slips a finski or some quiet AA to the ones who seem ready, and rides the Greenie home "with his Gratitude-battery totally recharged."

What to notice

The scene quietly deputizes the reader: the toilets' cleanliness "might seem surprising until you head into the shower area, with your equipment and face-mask" — the generic second person of AA testimony reassigned to a mop, so the Shattuck tour happens on your shift. Notice how completely the shelter is staged as spectation — D.T. cases "treat the heaters like TVs", the night supervisors run soft-core behind the desk, the stragglers watch the feces-hosing "like a sport" and yell advice — while the one man actually working screens input with a vengeance: Gately's sobriety is drawn here as a discipline of not-watching, extending even to inference, to what he "very much needs to assume" about the shoe catalogues. And Stavros's thirteen-month witticism is crueler than he registers: you cannot tell men in a homeless shelter to "just go home". They are.

Beats — page-by-page

  • p. 434: Annie P.'s "sunlights on the side"; the 0430h Inbound Green Line plus two trains to bombed-out Jamaica Plain; the work itself — anti-fungal delousing of cot floors and walls, toilets, and the shower area requiring equipment, mask, and a preliminary industrial hose ("human waste in the showers on a daily fucking basis").
  • pp. 434-435: Stavros Lobokulas — long cigarette-filter, the enormous collection of women's-shoes catalogues behind the truck seats (Gately "very much needs to assume" he only browses); the billing scam (3 hours done, 8 billed); Stavros's afternoon at Pine Street Inn with other "broke and desperate yutzes" cruised from halfway houses.
  • p. 435: the inmates' inventory — schizophrenia the norm, D.T.s guys treating heaters like TVs, puke-buckets aimed at "like golfers treat the pin," the hidden corner where sperm moves slowly down the walls ("way too much sperm for just one or two guys, either"); "The whole place smells like death no matter what the fuck you do"; Gately's head-switch and vengeance-grade input-screening; the dead-eyed night supervisors his own size who keep offering him a job, and his Thanks Anyway; home by Greenie "with his Gratitude-battery totally recharged."
  • p. 435: this was the menial job he landed with three days left on his resident month's deadline, and he's kept it since.
  • pp. 435-436: the stragglers who won't clear out by 0500h — the worst guys, clumping behind him to spectate the feces-jetting "like a sport and yelling encouragement"; "a couple have those little shaved patches on their arms" (transdermal-patch users); thrashing and screaming in the cots; reclaiming the sperm corner the minute he's done.
  • p. 436: almost always someone he knows from addiction and B&E days — the walking anti-advertisement for using; the finski or pack of Kools and a little quiet AA "if they seem like maybe they're ready to give up"; otherwise the Street-and-Jail stare at a point just behind their heads.
  • p. 436: Stavros's great ambition — the upward-mobile women's shoe store ("what is there to really say about ambitious career-dreams involving feet?"); Gately's restitution math and his private doubts about "the spiritual quality of the sobriety involved": Stavros's daily thrown mop and bellowed "Why don't you sorry motherfucks just go home?" — thirteen-plus months of finding himself hilarious.

Themes in this scene

  • Addiction and Recovery: Gratitude as a literally rechargeable battery — the program's deliberate use of bottom-rung horror as fuel; the resident menial-work requirement; carrying the message only to the ready; the Shattuck as the Disease's terminal ward, one bad relapse downhill from Ennet House.
  • Irony and Sincerity: Stavros's eight chemical-free years with zero spiritual content (the daily 'witticism', the foot-thing) vs. Gately's earnest, unglamorous practice — abstinence vs. recovery; and the inmates as "a better ad for sobriety... than any ad agency could come up with," a line that lands twenty pages after the book's epic of actual ad agencies.

Connections — backward & forward

Backward

  • The ad-agency line (p. 436) reads as a deliberate coda to Hal's advertising-history reverie (pp. 410-418, scene 087): the one demand-creating spectacle V&V never devised is the unsponsored sight of end-stage addiction.
  • The "little shaved patches" on the stragglers' arms (p. 436) echo n.169's transdermal 'Happy Patches' (scene 088, two scenes earlier) — the drug culture's hardware ambient even here.
  • Gately's solitary cleaning of what no one else will face sits directly after Mario's all-night Ajax-scrubbing of the Clipperton room (pp. 433-434, scene 089) — paired caretaker scenes.
  • The supervisors' job offers he keeps declining quietly mark how far he's come from taking whatever paid (cf. the Gately/Fackelmann B&E backstory threads, pp. 55-60, scene 016 and the late Gately sections).

Forward

  • The Shattuck recurs in scene 092: mopping there is where Gately now hears his childhood Sir Osis "Clopaclopaclop" (p. 449), and the early-shift world supplies the towel-cart Ennet girl at E.T.A. drills (pp. 457-458, scene 094 territory) — the two hill institutions' service economy.
  • Gately's restitution-poverty and double-shift exhaustion set up his irreplaceability as live-in Staff (the Lenz-walks era, pp. 539, scene 105ff) and the night everything goes wrong (pp. 601-619, scene 120).

Notable passages (4)

  • p. 434: "sunlights on the side" — Annie P.'s coinage; moonlighting inverted for the 0500h shift.
  • p. 435: "Gately gets to the shelter at 0459.9h. and just shuts his head off as if his head has a kind of control switch. He screens input with a fucking vengeance" — willed non-spectation as survival discipline; counter-image to the book's passive viewers.
  • p. 436: "a better ad for sobriety at any cost than any ad agency could come up with" — anchor passage where the recovery and advertising threads touch.
  • p. 436: "Why don't you sorry motherfucks just go home?" — Stavros's thirteen-month witticism; sobriety without compassion, in one repeated joke.

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