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Scene 140: blood sister finale

Scene
140
Pages
711–714
When
Wed 11 Nov YDAU (2009), late P.M. Study Period — Blood Sister's Act III and aftermath
Where
E.T.A. Viewing Room 6in: E.T.A. (Enfield Tennis Academy) › E.T.A. Viewing Rooms
POV
Hal Incandenza (3rd person), narrating the cartridge with the room

Connects to (editorial cuts & payoffs, 8)

Summary

Blood Sister: One Tough Nun turns splattery: the saved punker girl is found dead in her novitiate's cot, syringes foresting her arm, and Blood Sister reverts to her pre-salvation biker ways to avenge her — uncovering, liters of fake blood later, that the Vice-Mother Superior who'd "saved" her had never really been saved at all (twenty years of hidden recidivist soul-rot and a high-volume Bing operation run out of the Rescue Mission's confessionals), and that the Mother Superior herself murdered the girl to keep the chain's rot silent. After a Kabuki-volume free-for-all under the office's huge mahogany crucifix — the Vice-M.S.'s epiphanic anti-recidivist save, the Champlain-era tomahawk, the writhing invitation to "complete the lapsarian circuit" — Blood Sister shrugs, drops the hatchet, and walks out under a tympanum reading CONTRARIA SUNT COMPLEMENTA, riding her Hawg into a Toronto dawn whose horizon juts a discount Harley-muffler sign. The room applauds (sarcastically?); Hal out of nowhere retrieves the tormenting name — Smothergill — and Possalthwaite explains that he, Arslanian, and Blott have come to tell Hal about "something disturbing" they encountered on their tunnel shit-detail that afternoon, while Hal flips cartridge cases looking for Low-Temperature Civics.

What to notice

The synopsis's sentences catch the film's disease: trying to keep the salvation chain straight, the prose knots into corrective parentheses — "she (Blood Sister) thought had saved her (Blood Sister)" — grammar itself buckling under recursive obligation, the plot's whole problem performed at the level of syntax. Meanwhile a nun movie gets narrated in Boston AA capitals — the Vice-M.S. "had not only resumed Substance-dependence" and the dead girl "Out There pre-salvation" — so the sponsorship allegory Hal can't see stays glowing on the page's surface in borrowed recovery idiom. Note the narrator's wink at formula ambiguity — the ending is "unclear in a way that's supposed to be rich" — a sneer the novel's own agnostic non-ending quietly dares you to re-apply. And the closing flat sentence, as Hal flips through his dead father's oeuvre for one more fix of it: "All the cases are clearly labelled." — a small shiver in a book whose lethal cartridge travels in a case with nothing written on it at all.

Beats — page-by-page

  • p. 711: the girl found "bluely dead" in her cot, habit pockets stuffed with Substances, arm "a veritable forest of syringes"; Blood Sister suspects foul play over backslide; the reversion montage — demufflered Hawg, stud-leather over the habit, unbandaged tattoos, shaken-down altar boys, jiggers with cirrhotic contacts [n.296: potassium thiocyanate + ferric chloride = 'A + B Blood,' the splatter-film F/X staple].
  • pp. 711-712: the truth outs — the Mother Superior murdered the novitiate; the recursive irony that the evidence proving Blood Sister's salvation-debt discharged is inimical to the nun her own saviour is obligated to; in one scene she says fuck; a censer swung like a mace demaps a verger.
  • p. 712: Act III disclosure architecture — the Vice-M.S.'s 20+ years of "hidden degenerative recidivist soul-rot," dealing Marseillese-heroin-then-Bing out of the Community Outreach Rescue Mission's little-used confessionals; the dead girl's old copping venue was that very Mission (why the non-Catholic was so adept at the Confiteor); the M.S.'s motive: silence before the girl's conversion reached truth-telling pitch [n.297: Boone reads the superfluous mute Trappists as a symbolic Greek chorus of silence — "which strikes Hal as perceptive"].
  • pp. 712-713: the office free-for-all — two senior nuns teaming up on Blood Sister against the spot-lit mahogany crucifix; the upraised Champlain-era tomahawk (provenance: the Huron nun who'd decapitated Jesuits before being saved by the order's founder); the M.S.'s face "rendered indescribable in aspect by the absence of humility and the passion for truth-silencing that add up to pure and radical evil"; the Vice-M.S.'s epiphanic cold-cock with "a large decorative mahogany Christian object so symbolically obvious it needn't even be named" (Hal and Boone cringe).
  • p. 713: the stand-off over the prone M.S. — the Vice-M.S.'s writhing Go-ahead expression: "complete the lapsarian circuit or whatever"; Blood Sister shrugs, drops the tomahawk (its healthy knock to the prone M.S. "presented as clearly accidental"), ironic obeisance, the long echoing walk out under the tympanum — sword, ploughshare, syringe, soup-ladle, CONTRARIA SUNT COMPLEMENTA — so heavy Hal cringes and Boone must translate for Blott [n.298: also a sly Schtitt à-clef — We Are What We Revile — though Schtitt never translates it, letting Big Buddies adjust it to the pedagogical moment].
  • pp. 713-714: the ending — Blood Sister limping toughly eastward into the twittering Toronto dawn, astride the Hawg on the meanest street, expression "agnostic at best," the discount Harley-muffler sign jutting at her horizon; closing credits "the odd lime-green of bugs on a windshield."
  • p. 714: ambiguous applause from Boone and Bash; "Out of nowhere Hal remembers: Smothergill"; Possalthwaite says he and the Id-man brought Blott to tell Hal about "something disturbing they encountered during their disciplinary shit-detail in the tunnels that P.M."; Hal holds up a hand, flipping through clearly-labelled cases for Low-Temperature Civics.

Themes in this scene

  • Annularity: the film is a salvation ring — each nun saved by a nun she must repay by saving another — that rots from inside; "complete the lapsarian circuit," the circle of recidivist retribution refused with a shrug; even the ending loops her back toward the muffler-shop horizon of her old life.
  • Film and Optics: genre anatomy continued — F/X blood recipes, montage conventions, symbolic objects too obvious to name; Hal watching his father's irony machinery operate while n.289 (scene 138) has told us it was confession.
  • Addiction and Recovery: relapse as the plot's engine — the "saved" sponsor secretly Out There for twenty years, dealing from the confessional; the film's worst nightmare is exactly the sponsorship-failure dread that haunts Boston AA (and that JOI, per n.289, was allegorizing).
  • Irony and Sincerity: CONTRARIA SUNT COMPLEMENTA — contraries complete each other — hung over a door between a cringing ironist son and a father whose "metasilliness" hid earnest self-hate; Schtitt's untranslated pedagogical use (n.298) makes the motto live doctrine at E.T.A.

Connections — backward & forward

Backward

  • Concludes the screening braided through scenes 132 and 138 (pp. 686-706); the archive's film entry ("full E.T.A. viewing ~pp. 703ff") covers 138+140.
  • "Smothergill" resolves the name-block of scene 132/n.279 — the former-E.T.A. child actor (Phil Smothergill of the n.24 filmography; catalog at scene n024); the block's lifting coincides, pointedly, with the end of the father's cartridge.
  • The salvation-chain-with-hidden-rot structure parodies/inverts the recovery-fellowship chains the surrounding scenes celebrate (scene 139's CA speaker, Gately's Crocodiles): the film's dread — that your saviour was never saved — set against Boston AA's own epigram "You give it up to get it back to give it away" (p. 344, scene 074).
  • The Mother Superior "had eliminated the girl's map" (p. 712) / "bid adieu to her corporeal map" — demapping idiom shared with the street scenes (Lenz, yrstruly) and tagged maps-territory elsewhere; here it stays genre-pastiche.

Forward

  • The tunnel-detail boys' "something disturbing" (p. 714): the Possalthwaite/Arslanian/Blott Eschaton-fallout punishment crew, last seen hauling bags to the dumpsters during the Stice match (scene 130, p. 680); their report is never delivered on the page, and Blott's tunnel ordeal itself sits backward at scene 129 (pp. 666-673); the detail feeds the E.T.A.-tunnels uncanny that culminates in Hal-under-ground and Gately's dream-cartography.
  • The agnostic-ending freeze (relapse horizon under the muffler sign) mirrors the novel's own refusal of closure — the JOI-film aesthetic ("anti-confluential") Hal will name in later scenes (pp. 944, scene 179ff).

Notable passages (8)

  • p. 712: the confessional drug-operation disclosure ("covertly operating a high-volume retail operation out of the order's Community Outreach Rescue Mission's little-used confessionals") — the film's sacrilege-of-sponsorship core.
  • p. 713: the M.S.'s face — "the absence of humility and the passion for truth-silencing that add up to pure and radical evil" — JOI's moral equation; silence as the radical evil (pair with the wraith's figurant horror, pp. 834-839).
  • p. 713: "complete the lapsarian circuit or whatever" and the shrugged, dropped tomahawk — annularity refused; key extraction.
  • p. 713: the tympanum — "a sword and a ploughshare and a syringe and a soup-ladle and the motto CONTRARIA SUNT COMPLEMENTA" — with n.298's Schtitt à-clef; theme-motto for the whole book.
  • p. 714: "Out of nowhere Hal remembers: Smothergill." / the tunnel-detail boys waiting with something disturbing — two plot-doors clicking open in the scene's last breath.

Endnotes digested here

  • n.296 (p. 1054): potassium thiocyanate mixes 5/1 with ferric chloride to produce 'A + B Blood,' low-budget splatter's F/X staple.
  • n.297 (p. 1054): Boone — "a lazy student but very bright girl" — reads the mute Trappists as symbolic rather than narrative, a Greek chorus of silence; Hal finds it perceptive.
  • n.298 (p. 1054): CONTRARIA SUNT COMPLEMENTA as Schtitt-directed à-clef ("We Are What We Revile, or We Are What We Scurry Around As Fast As Possible With Our Eyes Averted"); Schtitt never translates or moralizes it, letting prorectors and Big Buddies fit it to the pedagogical moment.

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