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Scene 134: day cognomens missing lenz

Scene
134
Pages
692–692
When
mid-Nov YDAU (2009), undated; placed in the 14 Nov sequence, after Lenz's flight
Where
Ennet House (Day's Recovery Journal / the 3-Man room)in: Enfield Marine Public Health Hospital complex › Ennet House Drug & Alcohol Recovery House
POV
Geoffrey Day (3rd person, via his journal-keeping)

Connects to (editorial cuts & payoffs, 14)

Summary

A one-page Ennet House interstitial from Geoffrey Day's journal: Day has noted that most of the House's male residents keep "special little cognomens" for their genitals — 'Bruno,' 'Jake,' Minty's 'Fang,' Glynn's 'Poor Richard,' Foss's 'Bam-Bam' — and speculates it's a class thing, since neither he nor Ewell nor Erdedy has named his Unit. Pride of place goes to the departed Randy Lenz's 'Frightful Hog,' brandished at roommates for emphasis and expounded as a primo example of the Polish Curse. Lenz's discharge has moved Tiny Ewell — the one man in the House Day can converse with at depth — into the 3-Man room, and Day is nonplussed to find that after a couple of long nights he almost misses Lenz: the obsession with time, the patter, the upside-down wall-leaning, the Hog. He would die before admitting it; meanwhile a surprising amount of his Recovery Journal is filled with quotations from R. Lenz.

What to notice

A one-paragraph elegy disguised as fieldwork: everything about Lenz arrives in the past perfect — the Hog "had been short and thick and blunt", Lenz "had brandished" it at his roommates — the grammar of the obituary applied to a man who merely bolted. The free indirect voice lets Day's two registers collide inside single sentences, prissy scholarly apparatus ("viz.", "comparative-class data") wrapped around Lenz's barroom patter, so the journal-keeper's defense and his attachment are audible at once. The tell is bibliographic: grief filed as citation, a Recovery Journal full of "quotations from R. Lenz" with the formality of a source list — Day can only admit missing someone in a genre that pretends to be research. And the tenderest detail is the least intellectual one: what he actually misses is the body in the room, a man "leaning up against the wall upside-down in his briefs".

Beats — page-by-page

  • p. 692: the cognomen survey ('Bruno,' 'Jake,' 'Fang,' 'The One-Eyed Monk,' 'Fritzie,' 'Russell the Love Muscle'); Day's comparative-class hypothesis and journal data-entry, like Ewell's.
  • p. 692: Lenz's 'Frightful Hog' — two or three shades darker, short, thick, blunt; the Polish Curse: "Easy on the bottom but tears hell out of the sides, brother."
  • p. 692: Lenz's discharge; Ewell up into the 3-Man room; Day "would die before admitting he missed either Lenz or his soliloquies about the Hog" — yet finds himself almost missing him.

Themes in this scene

  • Addiction and Recovery: Ennet House texture between catastrophes — the journal-keeping, room reshuffles, and grief-shaped gap a blown-out resident leaves behind; "discharge" is the House's euphemism for Lenz's flight after the Nuck disaster.
  • Irony and Sincerity: Day the professional ironist caught in single-entendre feeling — missing a man he despises and filling his journal with him — and unable to admit it; the scene is his Crocodile-predicted softening in miniature.

Connections — backward & forward

Backward

  • Day vs. Lenz as roommates — the cage-match of pedantry and patter — runs back through the earlier House scenes (e.g. Day's arrival pp. 270ff, scene 066; Lenz's monologues pp. 538ff, scene 105); this is the coda.
  • Ewell's tattoo-survey fieldwork among residents (pp. 207-211, scene 056-ish) is the named model for Day's comparative-class data-gathering.

Forward

  • Lenz's "discharge" is the fallout of the dog-killing and the Canadian brawl that got Gately shot (scenes 114-120, pp. 538-619); scene 136 (p. 700) dates the departure loosely ("who knows how many days or weeks ago") from Kate Gompert's blurred POV.
  • Day's adversarial brilliance against AA logic is on full display in his resident-interface with Gately, digested at scene n090; the secret sentiment here is the first crack in that armor — the billowing-shape confession to Kate Gompert (scene 124, pp. 648-651) had already shown it splitting two nights earlier.
  • The anhedonia essay immediately following (scene 135) opens on a sensualist whose "beloved Unit" goes feelingless — the cognomen comedy modulating straight into the depression treatise; the splice is plainly deliberate.

Notable passages (2)

  • p. 692: "Lenz had referred to his own Unit as 'the Frightful Hog'... 'Easy on the bottom but tears hell out of the sides, brother.'" — Lenz's voice persisting after his exit; comic anchor.
  • p. 692: "Day would die before admitting he missed either Lenz or his soliloquies about the Hog" / "A surprising amount of Day's Recovery Journal is filled with quotations from R. Lenz." — denial as data; irony-sincerity extraction.

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