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The Orin–Hal phone call — "And not every Dickinson poem is…"

quote

‘And not every Dickinson poem is singable to ‘Yellow Rose,’ O. Sorry to disappoint you. For instance like “Ample make this bed—Make this bed with awe ” isn’t even iambic, much less quatrameter/trimeter.’

Context

Hal's second sentence into the call is a metrical demolition of Orin's Dickinson theory — the lexical prodigy scanning verse reflexively, mid-greeting. Note "quatrameter" (standard term: tetrameter) in the mouth of the family's designated corrector — possibly an authorial joke, a solecism inside the correction itself. (The stray space before the closing quote after "awe" is the text's.)

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