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The locker-room quiz (pp. 95–96)

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Michael Pemulis, who can stand about ten seconds of communal silence tops, clear his throat deeply and sends a loogie up and back into the sink behind him. The plate mirrors caught part of its quivering flight, Hal sees. Hal closes his eyes.

Context

Locker-room furniture doing quiet thematic work: Hal sees the loogie's flight only as the plate mirrors catch it — the scene's literal mirror, Hal watching the room by reflection minutes before the quiz renames him as a lens-distortion. ("clear his throat" as written, where grammar wants "clears.")

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