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the supine morning: the whole morning conducted flat on his back

quote

From my horizontal position on the bedroom floor I could use the TP’s remote to do everything but actually remove and insert cartridges into the drive’s dock.

Context

The horizontal turn of scene 170 doesn't lift — it runs the entire scene. Hal narrates all of it supine, "coccyx... numb from the pressure of the floor," the NASA glass "rising when my rib cage rose," everything reduced to what he can reach without standing into a tennis player. The body that "would on the whole have preferred not to play" simply stays down; the refusal to be vertical is the refusal to compete, sustained across an entire chapter.

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