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The moved-objects set read as a systematic pattern to the editor ("There are lots of references to moved objects")…

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This one was stable by design: a change was proposed, but the material survived unchanged, which is itself evidence.

In the manuscript. "1118 Boys in tunnel. Can this come out whole? There are lots of references to moved objects, and this ends up being just one more. I know how you feel about tunnels, though..." Michael Pietsch's December 1994 second-read letter

In the published book. Scene 129 (pp. 666–673)

Evidence. Independently corroborated. (letter + print text).

Bears on. This difference bears on the following open questions: is the wraith real (vs. Gately's fever).

Further notes. Pairs with diff-stice-wraith: the 1993 manuscript named the Wraith outright and the rename moved the mechanism into subtext — this letter shows the subtext holding as designed (an expert reader with no wraith key sees the pattern, not the agent, through two full reads: "the whole weird things-move-around aspect of the story that I still don't really understand" [p1]). "I know how you feel about tunnels" is also a small author-side datum: Wallace's tunnel-attachment was known to his editor.