endnote n.369: Sorkin's eliminated maps
For the two maps Sorkin had to have eliminated altogether during this period, it’s maybe worth observing that he eschewed both Towers and instead used the thuggish ex-Québecer muscleboys DesMontes and Pointgravè, who had no real loyalties or membership in any community and hired themselves out as enforcers for books and high-interest lenders all up and down both Shores. Gately did, as a coercive collector, demap one person, but it was essentially an accident—the debtor had been blond, and drinking Heinekens, and then when things got physical he’d squirted Gately in the face with Mace, and a red curtain of rage had descended over Gately’s sight, and when he’d come back to himself the debtor’s head was turned 180° around on his neck and had the little Mace can all the way up one nostril, and it was the most professionally horrified Gately had ever been up until the thing with the suffocated Canadian P.I.T., which anyway occurred much later and when Gately was way more nonviolence-prone.
Context
The whole of endnote 369, hung on scene 173's account of Gately and Fackelmann as Whitey Sorkin's Twin Towers — specifically on the maps "seriously fucking reconfigured" sentence at p. 914. The bookkeeping note on the idiom's ledger: outright map-elimination was outsourced past the Towers to loyalty-free Québecer muscle, and Gately's one demapping was accidental berserk rage he was professionally horrified by — the measure against which the Fackelmann climax and the DuPlessis suffocation both read. Closes the loop the pp. 886–887 foreshadow opened.