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The last medical attaché's ethnicity was revised across drafts — from one-quarter to one-half "ethnic Arab."

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This is a revision: the same material was reworked in substance between draft and print.

In the manuscript. "he went from one quarter to one half ethnic Arab' as the drafts proceeded" Riles's firsthand archive account

In the published book. Scene 7 (pp. 33–37; introduced at p. 33)

Evidence. A single source reports this. Documented by Riles's firsthand archive account (firsthand HRC sighting).

Further notes. substance-grain revision to the character who first receives the Entertainment; no motive is recorded or inferable from the sighting. Gated on eventual HRC text access.