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Pages 575–589

Randy Lenz, out at night · first-time reader guide · all scenes

When you've finished these pages: three things worth a second look, at the bottom.

The walk continues — Lenz and Green, Allston into Brighton, same 11 November night, now well past 10:45 — but the narration changes allegiance: alongside Lenz's monologue it starts excavating Bruce Green's interior, which the book has never opened before. Expect long single-sentence cascades (Lenz's mother's Greyhound saga runs almost two pages in one breath); that's the register, not a misprint. And a plain heads-up, folded in: these pages narrate the childhood catastrophe behind Green's silence — a Christmas gag turned lethal — and the scene ends with Lenz killing a dog, on the page.

Terms, in order of appearance

  • the new Joel girl (p. 575) — Joelle, veiled, in the House; the veil's actual affiliation is the one from her pp. 219–240 chapter, whatever Lenz says.
  • endnote 239 (p. 575) — one more layer of kept secrets under the betrayed one; worth the flip.
  • Mauna Loa (p. 578) — real Hawaiian volcano and a real macadamia brand; endnote 240 rides the can.
  • Buns of Steel (p. 579) — real late-'80s aerobics home-video series.
  • tetryl (p. 581) — real military high explosive.
  • V.F.W. / Rotarians / Shriners (p. 581) — real American fraternal orders; Shriners really do wear fezzes and drive tiny parade cars.
  • W. Miller tracts (p. 581) — William Miller, whose movement produced the Adventists; the aunt's faith.
  • endnote 241 (p. 582) — dates Green's decline by his taste in hard-rock bands; quick flip.
  • Depressed Residential (p. 582) — Tiny Ewell's classification for this kind of neighborhood.
  • Quenucker (p. 583) — Québécois, per the slur family you know; the flag on the house is Québec's fleur-de-lis.
  • Don Ho / Sol Hoopi Players (p. 583) — real Hawaiian musicians; slack-key and steel guitar are real styles.
  • slingshot Montego (p. 586) — a Mercury Montego cammed out into a street dragster.
After you read: three things

1. Green gets an inside, over his own head. The quiet guy from the pp. 38–39 Mildred Bonk vignette has been furniture for 500 pages. Here the narration states its method — his parents' deaths are so deeply repressed that "whole strata and substrata of silence" would have to be "strip-mined up" (p. 578) — then does the mining itself, above his awareness: the nut can, the snake, the Blammo Cigars. Every tic he has, including the Polynesian horror that drags him "as if mesmerized" up Brainerd Rd., gets its origin story in these pages.

2. You know the mechanics before Green does. When Lenz appears under the streetlight doing his "high-kneed tiptoed skulk" (p. 583), you can read the kit — the meatloaf, the baby-talk, the hand going up near the shoulder — from pp. 538–547. Green can't. Watch what Lenz says as he drops the dog: what "sounds like 'How dare you' with great emphasis" (p. 587). Three words carrying his entire pathology.

3. Read the ending as a ledger of witnesses. The scene is precise about who saw what: the lei-and-flannel Nucks spilling into the yard, the one who picks up the meatloaf's baggie, the Montego laying rubber uphill — and, across the street, a backlit figure "in a sort of suit and metal wheelchair," then a second one (pp. 588–89). You've seen what watching wheelchairs can mean, as recently as pp. 484–487. Green, meanwhile, ends the scene breathing into tree bark so his own breath won't testify.


Written only from this scene and earlier pages. Safe to read before you start.