IJ study archive

Pages 507–508

Pre-dawn, 1 May — the mountainside · first-time reader guide · all scenes

When you've finished these pages: three things worth a second look, at the bottom.

The Arizona mountainside again, nearly dawn now: a two-page installment, all dialogue. Steeply admits that Unspecified Services has lost its own people to the Entertainment during testing — an intern who peeked, and the twenty-year man who went in to pull him out. Marathe listens, recites personnel files he shouldn't have, and watches the constellations set. Nothing new to orient: same night, same two men, same argument about temptation — this scene just raises the stakes with a name and a hospital bed.

Terms, in order of appearance

  • C'est la guerre (p. 507) — French: that's war; Steeply shrugging off the intern.
  • four-point restraints (p. 507) — wrists and ankles both secured; hospital hardware, here for a man who wants nothing else.
  • jongleur / pantalone (p. 508) — a medieval minstrel; the commedia dell'arte's foolish old man. Marathe's reading of Perseus's hat.
  • Castor and Pollux (p. 508) — the Gemini twins, rising over Marathe's shoulder; real 32°-latitude sky.
  • terminal p (p. 508) — "the passive Reward of terminal p": the p-terminal electrode business from pp. 470–473, earlier tonight.
After you read: three things

1. The will-of-steel case. Hank Hoyne, head of Data Analysis, "was no child": at his diabetes diagnosis he "put down all sugar and treats... Not even a whimper or backward glance" (p. 507). Now: "four-point restraints... Nourishment through a tube. No desire or even basic survival-type will for anything other than more viewing." The scene's whole argument is that discipline and character are no defense — the strongest person you can build still loses.

2. Two anthropologies of will, one page apart. Roy Tony's "We done motherfucking surrendered our wills in here" (p. 506) sits directly before Hoyne's exemplary autonomous will failing (p. 507). The book has spliced these on purpose: surrender working, self-control collapsing. Read the seam.

3. "Empty of intent." Steeply, "as much terrified as I am intrigued," quotes the night-shift's memo-phrase for the victims' eyes — and Hoyne's world "as if it has collapsed into one small bright point. Inner world. Lost to us" (p. 508). Marathe's reply reframes the whole night: "Terror seems part of the temptation for you." His side wants only the weapon's ends and does "not fool crazily about." Meanwhile his wheelchair "gave small squeaks" — a sound the book made sinister twenty pages ago.


Written only from this scene and earlier pages. Safe to read before you start.